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Descriptive Essay About Kuta Beach

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Bali Island

Bali is a very famous island in Indonesia. Many tourists from all over the world visit each year. It is located between Java and Lombok. It has an area of 5620 square km. It has many tourist attractions which are interesting place to visit during a vacation on this island. One of the most famous and beautiful tourist attractions in Bali is the beaches. The most famous beaches that many tourism visited in Bali is Kuta beach, Sanur beach and Tanjung Benoa beach.

First, Kuta beach is the most visited beach by tourists because the beauty of the blue sea and the scenery. It is located in south of Denpasar City, Badung regency. It has white sand and several big coral stone. Besides beauty of blue sea panorama and white sand, Kuta beach also have good wave. The sound of the sea waves is so rhythmical, makes the people who having relaxed around the beach. The waves rolls are so amaze, and it can for play surfing. In addition, Kuta beach has a breathtaking sunset with its bright orange shine above the sea level. Many tourists sitting in the edge of the beach to see the sunset, make the situation around Kuta beach become crowded. So, Kuta beach is the most beautiful beach in Bali that is many visited by tourists and has awesome scenery.

Second, Sanur beach is a beautiful white sandy beach with calm and warm seawater located in east part of Denpasar Town. There are many shells for the avid collectors. The waves are calm, and it can for swimming. The sea very crystal clear where can see the sea creatures like starfish when walking at the beach. The atmosphere was fresh air and a comfortable sea breeze blowing. The Panorama south of Sanur beach is awesome sunrise in the morning. This beach is surrounded by many art shops that sell Balinese crafts, clothes, and accessories. Nearby the beach, it has The Le Mayeur Museum is paintings collection made by Balinese painter. To sum up, Sanur beach is a very wonderful panorama beach in Bali that has atmosphere calm and warm.

Tanjung Benoa beach is a quite beautiful beach. It is located at the tip of the Nusa Dua Peninsula. Tanjung Benoa is used to trurtles for breed so many foreigners call it turtle island. The beautiful of blue sea and white sand make this place become perfect scenery. There are many small huts on the beach for shelter and basking. Besides the wave on this beach is so calm and safe for water sports activities. In the beach, there have 'Glass bottom boats' to see the beauty of sea floor from boat and jetskis for water sport activities. Therefore, the situation is a bit crowded with tourists who are playing water sport. At the seaside, there are some trees such as palm trees and coconut trees to create coolness. In short, Tanjung Benoa beach is perfect scenery which has many sport activities.

In conclusion, Bali has many beautiful beaches that has different atmosphere each beach. Kuta beach well-known as breathtaking sunset, Sanur beach famous with awesome sunrise, and Tanjung Benoa beach is famous with water sport activities. I hope for the tourists, should maintain the beauty of every beaches. Do not pollute the beauty of the blue sea water with trash. And protect rare animals such as turtles and other marine creatures.

It has many tourist attractions which are interesting to visit during a vacation on this island. One of the most famous and beautiful tourist attractions in Bali are the beaches. The most famous beaches that many tourist visited in Bali is Kuta beach, Sanur beach and Tanjung Benoa beach.

It has white sand and several big coral sones. Besides the beauty of blue sea panorama and white sand, Kuta beach also has good wave. The sound of the sea waves is so rhythmical, makes the people relaxed around the beach. In addition, Kuta beach has a breathtaking sunset with its bright orange shine descending within the ocean bed beautifully. Many tourists sit on the edge of the beach to see the sunset, and this crowds the beach.

The waves are calm, and it good for swimming. The sea is very crystal clear whereyou can see the sea creatures like starfish when walking at on the beach. The Panorama south of Sanur beach has awesome sunrise in the morning.

Nearby the beach, it has The Le Mayeur Museum where there are collection of paintings made by Balinese painters. To sum up, Sanur beach is a very wonderful panorama beach in Bali that has calm and warm feel.

Tanjung Benoa is used by turtles for breedING, so many foreigners call it "THE turtle island". The beautiful of blue sea and white sand MAKES this place become perfect scenery. There are many small huts on the beach for shelter and basking. Besides the wave on this beach is so calm and IT IS safe for water sports activities. In the beach, there ARE 'Glass bottom boats' to see the beauty of sea floor from boat and jetskis for water sport activities.

Very well written and your conclusion was very sweet! I have made the desired corrections, rest is very good!! :)

Hi Sharah,

Your essay is very captivating and depicts the island of Bali correctly. Whether you want the essay to be expository or descriptive depends on how much personal opinion you add into your writing. Reading the essay now, it tends to be more descriptive since you have added your personal views to your descriptions. Hope it helps. Cheers :)

Hi Sharah

Firstly thank you for taking time on my essay.

Here I want to add some more corrections here..

...First, Kuta beach is the most visited beach by tourists because of the beauty of the blue sea and the scenery...

The waves are amazingly good for surfing too. ....

So, Kuta beach is the most beautiful beach in Bali visited by tourists and has awesome scenery....

... The atmosphere surrounded the beach has a fresh air and a soothing sea breeze blowingaround the ears. .

....The beauty of blue sea and white sand makes this place a perfect scenery....

Besides thisthe waves on this beach are calm and safe for water sports activities... Therefore, the place is a bit crowded with tourists who are playing water sport....

In conclusion, Bali has many beautiful beaches with different atmospherein each beach. Kuta beach well-known as breathtaking sunset, Sanur beach famous with awesome sunrise, and Tanjung Benoa beach is famous with water sport activities. I hope the tourists, should maintain the beauty of these beaches. Do not pollute the beauty of the blue sea water with trash. And protectthe rare animals such as turtles and other marine creatures..

Good luck :) It was good to know so much about the beaches of Indonesia .

Sharah, you did very well in developing the draft of your descriptive essay. I can sense your experience while you were at Bali Island as your personal experiences jump off the page. This isn't really an expository essay because you are speaking from your experience. Therefore, it is a descriptive essay. That sad, it seems that the essay went on longer than it should. While the others have already shown you some corrections to the grammar problems in your essay, I would like to show you how to not only correct your grammar, but also shorten the essay so that it becomes even more interesting to read. I'll show you my idea about how to that below:

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Bali is a very famous BEACH island TOURIST ATTRACTION in Indonesia. LOCATED BETWEEN JAVA AND LOMBOK, IT HAS A LAND COVERAGE OF5260 SQUARE METERS COMPOSED OF THE THREE MOST POPULAR BEACHES IN THE COUTNRY; KUTA BEACH, SANUR BEACH, AND TANJUNG BENOA.

Kuta beach IS KNOWN TO THE TOURISTS BECAUSE OF ITS BEAUTIFUL blue sea and scenery. Located south of Denpasar City, Badung regency. THE WHITE SAND BEACH IS ALSO KNOWN FOR ITS CORAL STONES AND EXCELLENT SURFING WAVES. A MAJOR TOURIST ATTRACTION IS THE BEACH VIEW OF THE SETTING SUN WHICH HAS A BRIGHT ORANGE COLOR, MAKING KUTA THE MOST POPULAR BEACH IN BALI.

, Sanur beach IS BEST KNOWN FOR ITS calm and warm seawater, WHICH MAKES IT PERFECT FOR SWIMMING. Located in THE eastERN part of Denpasar THE BEACH IS THE PERFECT PLACE FOR SEASHELL COMBERS. . The atmosphere OFFERS fresh air and a comfortable sea breeze . The Panorama south of Sanur beach OFFERS AN awesome sunrise VIEW in the morning. This beach is surrounded by many art shops that sell Balinese crafts, clothes, and accessories. Near the beach, IS The Le Mayeur Museum is THE HOUSES paintings made by Balinese painterS. To sum up, Sanur beach is a very wonderful panorama beach in Bali that has atmosphere calm and warm.

Tanjung Benoa beach is located at the tip of the Nusa Dua Peninsula. Tanjung Benoa is BETTER KNOWN TO TOURISTS AS TURTLE ISLAND BECAUSE TURTLES GO THERE TO LAY THEIR EGGS. The beautiful of blue sea and white sand make this place perfect . THE waveS on this beach ARE so calm THAT MAKES IT VERY safe for water sports activities. ONE OF THESE POPULAR TOURIST ACTIVITIES IS THE "GLASS BOTTOM BOAT" THAT ALLOWS THE TOURIST TO SEE THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA UNDER THEIR FEET.

In conclusion, Bali has many beautiful beaches WITH A different atmosphere FOR each beach. Kuta beach IS well-known FOR ITS breathtaking sunset, Sanur beach WAKES THE TOURISTS WITH AN awesome sunrise, and Tanjung Benoa beach is famous FOR water sport activities. I hope the tourists maintain the beauty of every beach . Do not pollute the beauty of the blue sea water with trash and protect rare animals such as turtles and other marine creatures.

has many attaraction tourism places to visit ...

The famous beaches that many tourism visit in Bali are Kuta beach, Sanur ...



Kuta Beach


Once a lonely little village on the road from Denpasar to Bukit Peninsula, Kuta is now the tourist Mecca of Bali, popular mainly among the young and adventurous. Kuta beach is one of the first favorite beaches discovered by tourist. Coconut trees line the sand beach as far as the eyes can see towards the north stopped by the runway of Denpasar's airport far in the west. The sunset in Kuta is most breathtaking. On the south, the beach is fenced by the airport's runway, which gives the visitors a breathtaking landing experience. Kuta Beach bustles with tourists' vendors and locals. It's the most popular beach in Bali and the island's number one party zone. The beach stretches as far north as the eyes can see. As short walk away north, the waves will invite to surfing. Rapid development and an influx of visitors haven't kept the surfers away and Kuta still remains one of Bali's best surfing beaches and a great place to enjoy a beach lifestyle.

While the surfers are still part of the Kuta scene, it's the shopping, nightlife and party vibes that attracts thousands of visitors. There's a huge choice of accommodation, restaurants and entertainment. The accommodation in Kuta range from a modest home stay for a few dollars a night to luxurious, five star, international hotels costing several hundred to several thousand dollars a night. Legian Street, situated directly behind the row of hotels that face the beach, is lined with shops of all varieties. We can find any Balinese handicrafts here, from the least expensive to the most exquisite; or unique stores such as the leather store staffed by two young Balinese men that will perfectly sculpt a leather jacket. (They are all extremely talented artists). _At night, Kuta is alive with night life. Western influences create discotheques, dance clubs, and pubs. Gastronomical demands inspire a multitude of restaurants, serving traditional Indonesian and Balinese food to various ethnic meals from Japan, Switzerland, etc. As if these were not enough, various Balinese dance performances are staged in Kuta every night. One of the best Kecak performances is found in Kuta.

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